When you loose someone close to you
You cant explain the way you feel,
The way you could just all hang out and never get bored
Just the way you could all be friends and never fight
You never got to say your last goodbye to your good mate
But always remember he is above us all
Telling us not to grieve and to get on with life
And live life like he would have
With passion and pride
And live it up for your mate because he cant anymore
But now he is watching from above.
You would always back each other up
Everywhere you go you look lonely
Now I see how much loosing someone means
I am so sorry I know I cant take your pain away
When you loose someone remember
All the good times
And not the bad ones
Because that is what matters the most
You make mistakes in life
But look-so does everyone else
So dont look at all the mistakes you made
Look at the ones you made together and how much fun you had
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3 comments:
My gosh, that was such an intense and beautiful poem. I'm sorry for your loss. I love the last two lines, they are so wise: making mistakes with a loved is still spending time with them. And spending time with those you love is the most important thing.
Keep writing poetry- you're very talented.
What a very touching piece, JMerrit188. I know for a fact that dealing with such a situation is hard. I lost someone dear to me last year, and it was tough. Good thing my relatives and friends were there to give me the support that I needed. They made me realize that I’m not alone in this ordeal, and that ‘someone’ is in a better place now. {Russell Dill}
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